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Harbourlee Rock

Postby oleck » Fri May 19, 2017 8:04 pm

Hello all.

I have witten something on the Harbour Rock. As always hope there is not to much grammar problem. Hope you like it.

Feed back for improving are well acepted.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwFgwGca_BvpR1pKQXlWUjgtbjA/view?usp=sharing
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Re: Harbourlee Rock

Postby Chimpman » Fri May 19, 2017 11:42 pm

Hi olek,

Once again you have delivered a great write up! I especially like how you take a very small portion of the world (in this case a small island off the coast of Karameikos) and use it to flesh out more details and history for the Shires and Karameikos - and the conflict between the hin and the Black Eagle.

Some comments:
On the map, I'm assuming there is probably some kind of trail from the Harbourlee Village to the Harbourlee Tower. Hin would have to dock at the village and move any supplies needed by the tower overland. That could make for an interesting adventure idea if the Black Eagle troops somehow tried to starve their neighbors out by sinking merchant/supply ships. Of course they would have to do such a thing without letting the halflings know who was involved (or at least leaving them proof).

Organization:
For me it would be better to organize the map descriptions by grouping them into their respective sides. First listing all of the hin holdings, and then listing the Black Eagle holdings. That's a minor issue.

Keep it up. I'm looking forward to more of these supplements!
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Re: Harbourlee Rock

Postby oleck » Sat May 20, 2017 1:42 am

Thx a lot for the feed back.

Modifications done :)
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